I just realised, soon this story will turn all the way back to page 1. Wich was posted back in 2001, 16 years ago. It has been a long run. Art and Characters have developed a lot since the begin of the milennium.
“Join the Elite Guard today. Join teh Kingdoms elite force, slay evildoers and adventure in the name of justice. Sign up today and get a free Sword and Armor!*”
*New Swords not always on hand due to high demands. Armor Delivery not guaranteed in time, with wait time up to 700 years.
Typo
“Your armor *was* still being constructed.”
I would change the whole line.
“(So-and-so) the royal armorer hasn’t yet finished your armor, so this will have to do.”
I just realised, soon this story will turn all the way back to page 1. Wich was posted back in 2001, 16 years ago. It has been a long run. Art and Characters have developed a lot since the begin of the milennium.
“Join the Elite Guard today. Join teh Kingdoms elite force, slay evildoers and adventure in the name of justice. Sign up today and get a free Sword and Armor!*”
*New Swords not always on hand due to high demands. Armor Delivery not guaranteed in time, with wait time up to 700 years.
He may claim that he can no longer fight, but he certainly looks like he can still fight!
Typo
“Your armor *was* still being constructed.”
I would change the whole line.
“(So-and-so) the royal armorer hasn’t yet finished your armor, so this will have to do.”